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Mist.
Silken and ghastly.
Like a bed of mysticism.
Impossible shapes.
Like opium dreams.
Forgetting reality.
Undo, un-create.

Fog.
Heavy like darkness.
Ascension of souls.
Wandering husk.
Aimlessly.
Maliciously.
An endless strife.

River.
Float to the shore.
Otherworldly driftwood.
Like a strain
A resounding phage.
Ethereal yet solid.
Incomprehensibleness.

End.
In this finality.
Naught shall remain.
But a hollow fragment.
Fruitless and bleeding.
A phantasmagoria.
Of never ending horror.

Terror.
Inside of you.
Blood in amok.
A frenzy of paranoia.
Swallowing night.
This is where you end.
By by presence.
My first ghost poem.
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smokedragon Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
"Like a strain/a resounding phage" Nice, I like that.
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9thSky Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you very much. Glad you like it.
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Thediamondintherough Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with =jactan, this is definitely one of your best poems so far, I love it. Every verse is my favorite.
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9thSky Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Again, thank you. I am baffled that you think so! But it makes me very glad.
Much obliged!
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Thediamondintherough Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome, my friend.
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jactan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is your best one yet, to my opinion. And in particular the last verse, i love that one.
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9thSky Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Wow, really? Thank you very much.
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jactan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Really ^^ , you know i like how you write (:
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